Friday, August 14, 2009

Story by Benjamin

I was tramping up a mountain when suddenly embers light up the sky.It was a volcano and it sounded like before I could finish the sentence.... BA BOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!. It was like a bomb had gone off.The heat was closeing in on my face. The ground rumbled and it disrupted the peaceful sky. It had a firey. red glow it was awesome sight I will never forget.
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  1. Mrs RollinsonAugust 23, 2009 at 12:23 PM

    Wow! This is a great story Benjamin. You have used some wonderful descriptive language and have given me a really good picture of what the volcano must have looked like.
    Mrs Rollinson

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  2. Marina KrijgsmanAugust 24, 2009 at 4:05 PM

    All the hours of reading Benjamin has certainly helped you be able to paint fantastic pictures with words. I can really imagine what the volcano looked like.

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  3. LuccaAugust 24, 2009 at 4:18 PM

    Awesome story Ben I like volcanos too.

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  4. UnknownAugust 24, 2009 at 5:40 PM

    WoW BEN YOU HAVE GOT A REALLY GOOD IMAGINATION, I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. SEE YA TOMORROW, JOHN

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  5. MAKENZEYAugust 24, 2009 at 7:50 PM

    GREAT WORK BENJAMIN.

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  6. IndyaAugust 25, 2009 at 8:29 AM

    What an AWESOME story BEN.

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  7. JackAugust 25, 2009 at 10:01 AM

    It was the best story BEN

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  8. fabric roseAugust 25, 2009 at 6:00 PM

    Harriet said ....

    I couldn't pick the best part because the whole story was excellent.

    Cool story Ben.

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  9. AnonymousAugust 26, 2009 at 2:50 PM

    Gosh Benjamin you're very popular. There have been a lot of comments to your blog already.

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  10. MichaelAugust 26, 2009 at 2:54 PM

    Wow it's a cool story Benjamin

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  11. MichaelAugust 26, 2009 at 2:55 PM

    Wow it's a cool story Benjamin

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  12. QuentinAugust 26, 2009 at 5:42 PM

    Wow that was a great story Benjamin. It was fantastic.

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  13. grace nAugust 26, 2009 at 6:48 PM

    That was a really awesome story our family had fun reading it. We thought we were right beside the volcano.

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  14. hannahAugust 26, 2009 at 7:42 PM

    a great story ben

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  15. Matthew AllanAugust 26, 2009 at 7:58 PM

    WOW Benjamin, awesome descriptive story. Since we live next door I hope there are no volcanos like that in your house!!!

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  16. QuentinAugust 27, 2009 at 7:25 PM

    Great story Benjamin. It was fantastic.
    Quentin

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  17. madeleineAugust 28, 2009 at 5:11 PM

    Hey Ben I thought your story was...AWESOME, FABULOUS,EXCITING,MARVELOUS,.
    I enjoyed reading it.
    THANKS!

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  18. JoshuaAugust 31, 2009 at 5:26 PM

    wow I like your story

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  19. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2009 at 9:06 PM

    Wow cuz awesome story

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